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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness

    Thank you so much! This is all very helpful!

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Me Down

    Could you copy, paste and comment? I'll see if i can find it.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness

    Okay, it won't allow me to put spaces in between stanzas. I'll see if it's less glitchy later.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness

    Thank you! I'll figure out where i should put stanzas.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Afraid To Fly

    I don't have questions, and whatever she meant and said, is what SHE said and meant. So, please, if i disagree, don't make me thank her, or like what she ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Me Down

    I'll look at it. Could you send me a link?

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Me Down

    I made it rhyme. I personally like it a lot better now, and i would love it if nyou could reread it.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Me Down

    I was told by a moderator that i'm not good enough as a writer to rhyme. I was also told that i should listen to them because they are important ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Darkness

    Thank you so much. I'm really so glad that not only does someone else understand my views, but there is someone who also enjoyed this poem of mine. Thank you! ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: But I Still Love You

    Thank you. I will definitely keep this under consideration. I'm personally not a huge fan of pointing out the obvious, but i guess that i have to. Not even in ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Afraid To Fly

    Yes, well i am not going to just completely change my poem. Okay, so i had a good idea but the poem itself isn't good enough? I know that you ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Afraid To Fly

    It isn't helpful, because it's the exact same thing and i still don't need your book. Thanks away. I do have one question, though. How do you delete things? Sorry, ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Pathetic

    Well, you don't have to. You never have to. It's your work, so you are the one who should make the decision on which edits will improve your story, and ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Afraid To Fly

    Thank you for your review. I can be a bit careless when writing at times, so i'll look at it when i'm a bit less tired.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: But I Still Love You

    Yes.

    Jun 5, 2014


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