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Thanks :D ! I knew it sounded awkward I just couldn't figure out how to make it better. I can't wait to get started on it.

Wow, I loved the way this was put together. I thought it was original. I do agree with Audy though about 'that' out of "But I know that it’s only ...

"A silent song from the coast, Sings to those the ocean loves, And to those who love the ocean," That was my favorite line. I liked the imagery here. I ...

I thought this was a great piece although some parts were unclear. I could see how it would be about smoking, too, but I thought overall it was very good. ...