rebecca_anne_mcfarlane

Thanks :D ! I knew it sounded awkward I just couldn't figure out how to make it better. I can't wait to get started on it.

This is a short story I wrote two years ago, I think. This is the first story I have written in a long time so there's definitely a good bit ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this and I haven't read much science fiction/fantasy. Emma is a really like-able character and I found it easy to relate to her. I love how ...

Wow, the image you set in this poem is very clear. I loved the imagery and the mood you placed. I could practically see their faces. I can't think of ...

Enjeru, I really enjoyed your piece. Great use of words. I can see why you're a senior writer, but towards the end I became a little confused about what was ...

Hey there Cloggrabby, Great job! I think this is really good so far and I can't wait to read more. I didn't see much in error. The only thing I ...

Wow, I loved the way this was put together. I thought it was original. I do agree with Audy though about 'that' out of "But I know that it’s only ...

"A silent song from the coast, Sings to those the ocean loves, And to those who love the ocean," That was my favorite line. I liked the imagery here. I ...

I thought this was a great piece although some parts were unclear. I could see how it would be about smoking, too, but I thought overall it was very good. ...