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I can appreciate the description, enlightening me on what an episode must be like. You see, I have no experience with epilepsy and those who suffer from it. Thus, I ...

Good stuff, I dig how you began and ended with the scarlet hue on her cheeks. I appreciated the touch. It gave it this feeling that it was a cycle. ...

Nice work, you did a great job setting up the tone for this piece. Two bits that truly captivated me: "relished the hunt" and "the chill of the mid October ...

These are minor mechanical errors. A little boy,perhaps a year older then she, came up to her and keeled down in front of her. A little boy, perhaps a year ...

It's an intriguing piece. Definitely original, the idea of using emotions as a substance. Now, getting down to the gritty I wondered if it was necessary to have such a ...

Man, I've forgotten what the stars look like. It's a thought that occurred to me. Clouds galore hide them from sight: nonetheless, I digress. I enjoyed it. There was this ...

Good luck, bro. 'Tis a good deed, but you already knew.

Great piece. I appreciated how the words vividly expressed what took place. As the previous review stated: the story is truly engaging and overall an excellent story. I would've to ...