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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Masquerade That Never Ends

    Wow, Thank you all I loved your critiques. I am about to edit it and am adding a bit more so it isn't such a terrible cliff hanger, I just ...

    Aug 7, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Changeling in Afanadar: Prologue

    All in all the story was good, but you put a little excess description. And how do unicorns talk?? I get the elf part but that just annoyed me.

    Aug 7, 2007


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