raynaleanne

That was great, different from the last chapter, but it has more detail of the characters. I liked that you showed that this Mr. Cooper isn't only an author, but ...

A candy apple blue corvette? Wouldn't that be red? Anyway the story was intrigueing. I like how you are an author and writing a story about a struggling author. I ...

I liked the story Bre, it was good. Although I would have to agree with the mod person that the repetition of the chasing doesn't really do very much for ...

Please critique this, be honest! I can take anything you throw at me. Every ending seems to be another beginning in my life. The ending that started them all was ...

Wow, Thank you all I loved your critiques. I am about to edit it and am adding a bit more so it isn't such a terrible cliff hanger, I just ...

All critiques are appreciated, good or bad please! Every ending seems to be another beginning in my life and the ending that started them all was when Mother died. It ...

All in all the story was good, but you put a little excess description. And how do unicorns talk?? I get the elf part but that just annoyed me.

You need to make it all more clear. At first it seemed more like she was a human detective and then you see her looking back into her file where ...

As you obviously know I am new. My name is Rayna Leanne Potts, funny last name I know. Anyways...I am 14 going on 15 and rebellious like most teenagers. I ...