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I would love reviews on this! Be absolutely brutal! :) -Rachael I seemed to have forgotten how to scream. I could see that these two men were a threat, but ...

Xiahou Zay, thanks again! Your review helped out a lot! I'll make sure to edit part two as soon as I can! I should be posting chapter two sometime soon, ...

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx! Thanks for the review! I see exactly what you mean; thanks for pointing those mistakes out. What was perfect? It almost sounded like she was being sarcastic. In ...

Hi Tinkem! :) I think that this idea is really good! You should definitely keep writing it because I really want to see where you go with this! :) Also, ...

Hi Xiahou Zay! :) I really enjoyed this first chapter! I'm very interested to see where you're going with this story. However, I did see a few typos and confusing ...

Thanks so much for the review! I've overlooked this chapter so much so it's really helpful when you point out the flaws! I'll yet again apply these when I edit ...

Thanks Xiahou Zay! I get what you're saying about telling everyone what it's about, but I wanted it to be a bit mysterious in the beginning. You understand what it's ...

Thanks so much, Shadowhunter14! I will definitely apply your corrections! :) Glad you liked it; it means a lot!

Hi! :) Welcome to YWS (even though I joined the same day you did :)). I'm glad to be your first reviewer! I just have a few comments to help ...

Hi Jane! :) I'm also new here and I find that the easiest and fastest way to find friends is to review ! The more you review, the better! If ...

Hi!:) I would appreciate it if you could review the first chapter (split into two parts) of my novel, "Anything But Normal". Thanks so much! :) Here's the link:

So far, I really like the storyline. It's intriguing and different. Great job on that! :) I did see quite a bit of grammatical errors, though. You might want to ...

I think this is really good! I like the plot so far and the mystery that surrounds Caleb and Eva. Very nice! :) Though, it can definitely be improved. If ...

Hi! :) If you can, I would love a few critiques on the first chapter (split into two parts) of my novel, "Anything But Normal". Here's the link: It's a ...

Haha, I absolutely adored this poem! I was actually laughing by the end. :) I loved your rhythm as well as the story. Keep writing! This was fantastic! :)