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I love this! :) I especially adore the waterfall looking thing (I'm not entirely sure what it's called) at the bottom; the colors there are beautiful. I do understand that ...

Thanks Lupis! I see exactly what you mean! It helps a lot, thanks again! :)

I think this flower is gorgeous! :) Your lines are superb, your color choice works together nicely, and I can tell that you really pay attention to details. The only ...

I think this is really good! :) I maybe no expert at drawing (who am I kidding? I suck) but I do like this. This is something that I would ...

I love this story! :) You should definitely stick with the narrative style since it's different, fits perfectly, and allows you to add a ton of witty and humorous lines. ...

Very nice! :) I loved your description here, as well as the conversations among the characters; they seemed very real. I adore your writing style; it has a sort of ...

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx!! Thanks so much for the review! I completely agree! :)

Thanks yet again, CarbonCore! The review helped a ton! :)

Thanks for the review CarbonCore! I'll make sure to take your advice and revise some parts of this chapter. Thanks again! :)

Hi Coco! :) I know this is a bit late, but I just found this. If you get a chance, can you review my novel, "Anything But Normal"? That would ...

You know, I've always felt that there wasn't something quite right with that sentence. Thanks for pointing it out! :) I'll definitely change it to something that fits better. Yes, ...

Hi! :) I really like this story so far! I like the plot (from what I can see) and feel that it has great potential! However, I did find many ...

Hi! :) I'm so glad you asked me to review this! I love where you're going with this; I can't wait to read more. I love how developed your characters ...

Thanks, Summerlovee! No, you did help! Just letting me know that you like it helps a lot! :) I hope you get the chance to read the next chapter when ...

Hi!:) I absolutely adore this! I'm very interested to see where you're going with it, so keep it coming! :) I just have a few nitpicks. When Reni blink the ...