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Thanks so much for all of your helpful comments! I'll definitely put them to use! Since this is just a first rough draft, I'm planning on definitely reviewing it later ...

I agree that it seems like you were so concerned with rhyming the words that you seemed to pay little attention to the overall story being told by using those ...

I liked it! I'm trying to figure out how long it took you to write this because I can see the effort you put into it. Good job on the ...

I really like this poem! I think you did a really good job on it. The only thing that I have a problem with is the rhythm and timing seems ...

I love this! Again, you put a ton of emotion into this poem as I have noticed that you do with many of our other poems, and I really liked ...

Excellent posting! I really liked the visual that you gave me, as well as your chosen words. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep 'em coming! :)

I think you did a really good job on this! I enjoyed the rhythm that you used since it portrayed a more angry tone to it which is exactly what ...

Amazing, amazing, amazing. I really like this poem and honestly cannot think of any critiques. I loved your rhyming and I felt that all of the words just flowed perfectly ...

I looked at my small body in the mirror. The blue in the short, strapless dress brought out the blue specks in my dark grey eyes. My long, dark brown ...

Personally, I don't write poetry but I enjoy reading it. This poem was absolutely superb! I feel that you captured the emotion perfectly and really went into detail of the ...