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I don't usually write this type of poem, but it kind of just...came to me. I realize the rhyming scheme isn't perfect, but I didn't want to mess up the ...

Great work, everyone! It was superb! :D

Hey! :) Alright, so I really love this poem. You've managed to capture imagery and emotion beautifully into this. I love the way how the narrator couldn't decide whether to ...

Hi! I'm back again to review your first chapter! I hope you'll find this review helpful. :) First off, the typos: The meadow we were in was a small place ...

I love this. You have created such beautiful imagery and yet have packed so much emotion into it. Your word choice is superb and the rhythm is without a flaw. ...

I love this. You can so easily tell when someone has talent when they create such a short poem with so much emotion packed into it. I've always been obsessed ...

Hi! So, I'm Rachael and I'll be reviewing your Prologue here! :) First off, the typos: Kailee, my sister, I wonder... What would you say to me today? This sounds ...

I love this. It's short and sweet, yet leaves me with a million different images and ideas in my head. I love how you describe this woman as beautiful. The ...

This was so incredibly epic that I don't even know what to say. I absolutely adore the idea of it and how much you took advantage of the comic potential. ...

Just came up with this on the spot. Let me know what you think! How do you love another? After you’ve already loved before? How do you explain your love ...

Hope you enjoy! Please let me know what you think! :) Little yellow flowers Cover me tonight Filling the air with fragrance Bringing me delight They lay around me On ...

All right, this is my second poem outside of school. Hope you like it! Tiny grains of sand Underneath my feet Telling me I'm whole, Saying I'm complete I would ...

Decided to try out some poetry for the first time outside of school. Hope it's not too awful. Let me know what you think! I can't get you out of ...

Amazing, amazing, amazing. I know I said I'd review this a long time ago, but I haven't been on YWS lately because I was occupied with finals and all. But, ...

Hahaha, I absolutely love this. Pure genius. Your rhythm is spot on and doesn't feel forced. I liked the style that you used; it was quite hilarious. Also, I agree ...