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Re: Corporate Holdings part 2
Thanks for the reviews to the first one! This is the middle part. Ending will be up tomorrow. Thanks again!!! :D _________________________________- The news camera hovered in front of my ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Corporate Holdings
Hey! Thank you so much for the reviews. I'm going to post the second/final part later tonight or tomorrow. Thanks again!
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Corporate Holdings
It was so cold that I was convinced that the air around me had a strong desire to kill me; it was almost painful to breathe. I even got my ...
Sep 20, 2008 -
Re: Boulders
Thank you all so much for reading it and your suggestions. This is the first draft of the first part. What I'm gonna have happen next is Jon notices Rocky ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Boulders
Jonathon Stachem woke up slowly, eyes red. Too much grass last night, he thought. He closed his eyes, attempting to return to a quite wonderful dream that involved several women ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger Hunt
The pine tree’s interweaving branches that made the dark forest’s canopy failed in their challenge to block all light as some remnants from the moon reflected sunlight managed to seep ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Laughing on the Outside
Dear Sir Jim, I’m writing this to you, Jimmy, so you know the ending to my story. You’ll never see me again, although you might hear of me on the ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: The Journal of Me (workin title) - Chapter 2
Thanks for reading!!! Check out the first chapter too (if you want). Here's a link : Chapter 2 The best way to find work, especially in a town such as ...
Jun 30, 2007 -
Re: The Journal of Me (workin title) - Chapter 1
Chapter One “There is a ghost haunting my inn,” the innkeeper, whose name was Forg, said. I looked at him, and then back at Gordon, who looked as confused as ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: The Warrior
The warrior hunts. He exists solely because he must exist. He fights because that is his purpose. He may never know rest, but the torment that he brings to evil ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day (edited)
A horrible, terrible, disgusting, although shameless bump so that people see the edit. Thanks for the comments! :):):)
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Weather
Think dirty when you read this...haha....... ____________________________________________ Stay inside with me. We can watch the weather change. From this safe view we can decide: Warm it up or cool it
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: The Bad Review
I love this poem. Seriously, this is kickass. But, yeah, just change the paranthesis into italics. Excellent work!
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: a misleading love poem
Nothing I can add on to what others have already said. Very powerful poem.
Jan 30, 2006 -
Re: Sweat strings
Yar, I agree with Firestarter. You need to build upon this. "Bitterness Is done for In the salty sea Of sugary Delight" Seems like an oxymoron, I guess? Salty sea ...
Jan 30, 2006
