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Thanks for the review guys!

Thanks! I will try to correct the grammar mistakes next time

Thanks for the advice!!

Haha!! Funny story dude! Laughed till my ass hurts. Short but great! Well done..Looking forward to your next work!

Thanks alot for the review!! Do you have any suggestions to improve the story? P.s. i always mixed up my tenses...^^

Thanx for the review!!!;)

Thanks alot. I will try to to improve. I wrote this 3 years ago so I was just getting started to write but then I lost the motivation to write. ...

I can't quite understand what the story is.....Could you declutter sme parts???

Can you tell me how Cecilia got into the dream world? Is it like the movie Inception? I think you should write more about Mathew. Could you continue the story? ...

Nice! A bit short i think and the dialogue could be a little irrating sometimes. Why? Don't know. Just that i felt like it

Nice fanfiction stuff here. Not in the awsome category but pretty good. I've played Left 4 Dead 1 and 2. Not much story in the game so it was pretty ...

I'm scratching my head for some time now. Maybe you didn't describe more details since its in a fantasy world...So, that could be the cause i'm feeling abit awkward

It won't get you the Pulizter Prize but i laughed my ass of with this!! You got your inspiration from DOn quixote i wonder?

Amazing. That's what i'm telling you. Although it seemed weird at some parts but it was pretty good. Too much details at some parts but that could be reworked...Keep on ...

I think it's pretty good for a sixth the way, how old is sixth grade? I'm from a country that does not use the grading system