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Re: The Concept of Infanity
The characters are not so well developed i guess. There's nothing for me to be close to the characters. You should add some background story perhaps to develop that intimate ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: View from the Crack in the Wall
I think Sarg covered everything. He reviewed one of my works before and it stung at first. But keep an open mind and try to improve. Would rather you rather ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: From the Ashes
Oh crap, You are so good. Your writing style sort of reminded me of Stephen King. The characters felt real and alive. The dialogue was great! Can you teach me ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Away
Hmn, quite interestin story u got there. I just felt that i may had read somewhere a story like this before. I'm not saying that you copied but maybe you ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Life
I think that the way you write the story is really good. Just that I felt that this short story should be a poem instead. I think it will much ...
Mar 8, 2011