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This is one of the short stories i have written a couple of years ago. It's shorter than the first one and i hope it's better! Review away and don't ...

Nice! A bit short i think and the dialogue could be a little irrating sometimes. Why? Don't know. Just that i felt like it

Nice fanfiction stuff here. Not in the awsome category but pretty good. I've played Left 4 Dead 1 and 2. Not much story in the game so it was pretty ...

I'm scratching my head for some time now. Maybe you didn't describe more details since its in a fantasy world...So, that could be the cause i'm feeling abit awkward

It won't get you the Pulizter Prize but i laughed my ass of with this!! You got your inspiration from DOn quixote i wonder?

Amazing. That's what i'm telling you. Although it seemed weird at some parts but it was pretty good. Too much details at some parts but that could be reworked...Keep on ...

I think it's pretty good for a sixth the way, how old is sixth grade? I'm from a country that does not use the grading system

kinda short but full of emotions.... Well done Looking forward to next work

Oh crap, You are so good. Your writing style sort of reminded me of Stephen King. The characters felt real and alive. The dialogue was great! Can you teach me ...

Thanks alot for the advice you've given. It stung at first but i realise what you were saying is true...Gonna work harder on it! By the way, is the story ...

Hmn, quite interestin story u got there. I just felt that i may had read somewhere a story like this before. I'm not saying that you copied but maybe you ...

Wow, i seriously thought that this is a poem....Deep in meaning. Good job

I think that the way you write the story is really good. Just that I felt that this short story should be a poem instead. I think it will much ...

Hey guys i deleted this post cause i want to edit it...;)