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I think that the story doesn't have a consistent flow. Its disjointed and sketchy at some parts. Although some here thinks its a great work, for me its not yet ...

Extremely touching story...I almost cried reading this work of yourself. Wonderfully written and skillfully phrased. The writing style suited the mood so well that I'm already hooked with the first ...

Wonderful story. The MC seemed real and not just a story character. Old ideas like war and modernization suited the mood and setting of the story. I felt a bit ...

Haha!! Funny story dude! Laughed till my ass hurts. Short but great! Well done..Looking forward to your next work!

Thanks alot for the review!! Do you have any suggestions to improve the story? P.s. i always mixed up my tenses...^^

Thanx for the review!!!;)

Short but full of stuff. Just like what Stephen King used to say: simple but fun gets the job done...Anyway, you should try writing more and expanding it into a ...

Wonderful written. At first i thought she was in a dream you know. The way you wrote it made me felt that way. You also flawlessly written the part where ...

Hi there! I wrote this story for a contest. Didn't win it but I just want to share it and see what you guys think about it. My Mother’s Legacy ...

Powerful, emotional, touching. The ingredients of a good story. No dialogues but the message was clear and sharp. Almost zero clutter and every part of the story is important to ...

The characters are not so well developed i guess. There's nothing for me to be close to the characters. You should add some background story perhaps to develop that intimate ...

Thanks alot. I will try to to improve. I wrote this 3 years ago so I was just getting started to write but then I lost the motivation to write. ...

I can't quite understand what the story is.....Could you declutter sme parts???

I think Sarg covered everything. He reviewed one of my works before and it stung at first. But keep an open mind and try to improve. Would rather you rather ...

Can you tell me how Cecilia got into the dream world? Is it like the movie Inception? I think you should write more about Mathew. Could you continue the story? ...