rainsallthetime

Err....One question: What did Dan died from? Ghosts? Demons? What killed him? I get the idea that the letters will signal the death of a person. But what I didn't ...

This was awesome. Congrats on that! I was immediately hooked to the story once I read the first sentence. Slight grammar mistake here and there but hey, no one's perfect! ...

Three words. Need more description. The story has a good plot and theme that is quite interesting but I felt you were skipping some of the vital parts of the ...

The grammar problems are already corrected by the reviewers here. SO I will skip this part as I feel its not the grammar that makes the story but the characters ...

I think the story and the message you tried getting through was pretty clear. Lots of reviewers before me had already mentioned that. I understood the plot and the theme ...

I'm saying this again because some of you guys may not have read the original version. I had written extra parts and segments to make the story more full of ...

Thanks for the review guys!

:D I got an inspiration to write a story based on the movie, I am Legend. It was an epic movie and I loved it. I just hoped that you'll ...

Thanks! I will try to correct the grammar mistakes next time

I was really fascinated by the story. It was really original without trying hard to be so. I was hooked from the first line. Maybe you could add more paragraphs? ...

Thanks for the advice!!

At first glance, i really really thought I'm reading a story where a girl had to say goodbye to her boyfriend or something like that. Romance. Love. The works. But ...

I liked your character really much. Wish you could add more details and the things he did in his life to OBVIOUSLY show that he really is a sociopath. If ...

Hey guys, I expect this story to get ripped apart and criticized till it burns! :D The Facility. Elliot ran faster. Dog barks and shouts can be heard. Rain was ...

In my opinion the 'drip' part was distracting and disrupts the flow of the story. Near the end when the 'drip' part stops, only then i could start reading with ...