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I'm not writing a fanfiction, its more as me imagining that I'm someone important and commenting on the themes and ideas behind the play and the author and his inspirations. ...

Hey I'm thinking about writing my own Afterword for 'Life Of Galileo' by Bertolt Bretcht. But I had to ask: can someone other than the author write an afterword? And ...

Heya! I'm writing a piece at school about conflict. And I just wanted your thoughts/any debate on the idea of conflict. That being, the nature of conflict, its consequences, causes ...

This is really good! However, I think you should try and keep the length of each line consistent through each of the verses, besides that, great job! -rainbowbubblex

Loves it! I'm an Australian-bred Pakistani, and I know exactly how you feel. The media's potrayel of our race is discriminative, one shouldn't be judged because of that, as the ...

A small beam of light infiltrated through the freight train’s unstable roof, the beam was so minuscule, therefore it perfectly resembled the amount of hope I possessed. Around us, the ...

Heyy, This poem is alright, but it could use alot of work, take note of all the mispellings marked by StoryWeaver13 as poor grammer can turn off readers in an ...

There’s something behind that innocent eye, A forlorn memory, That she’s seen, and she keeps asking why? It causes her grief, and infinite pain, And when those diamond tears would ...

I lie beneath the curving waves, With this mystique world, Beneath the depths of another, It consumes the emotions deep within, Allowing this oneness with nature to begin. Submerged deep ...

MAADDY! and you say you can't do poetry? This is really good :D It has great imagery, and has a good flow, you should write more poems ;) -rainbowbubblex

smashles, i hate you! ;) joking! Love the poem! Great flow, and the rhyme works really well here, and the end leaves you on the edge of your seet :D ...

hey isha! Great to meet you. Cool as! Lavender is awesome as well :3 I'll be sure to give you a random pm oneday, as the people on here are ...

Once again blossom you've written a fantastic poem! Great story and concept behind it, and it paints a really good picture in the reader's mind. :D You've portayed the hardships ...

Nice to meet you guys! Okay so maybe I was a "bit" brief when I was indroducing myself ;) I live in a country town in Victoria, Australia. Call me ...

Okay, apparently I'm supposed to introduce myself on this "welcome mat", so here I am saying a warm hello ;) I'm fourteen, and enjoy anything that has to do with ...