radiatelove23

you have a really great script going on here, i have to say im with the above person.i liked that part of the script and how it says how can ...

okay let me start off with saying i liked your poem.the way you can see and feel the anger and disgust.the choice of words;the cursing just proves it a little ...

i really liked and enjoyed your poem! along with the choice of words you used. i liked how not all the verses rhymed and how you were able to get ...

i liked the needless of punctuation, where you were able to just let go and write whats on the mind,so i say good job:)

first off let me say you did a wonderful poem, very unique and i loved it. the emotions she was feeling were so vivid and my attention was grasped as ...

hey there, i reviewed your small poem and let me say i agree with what you may be small but it tells it all straight up and it's what i ...

hey there, i reviewed your poem and it really grabbed my attention. i loved the flow and rhythm you had going.the use of words and meaning towards it. amazing job!

you have a nice poem going on, my attention was really grabbed but it began getting loose towards the end but maybe it's just me. i did have a little ...

hi there,just want to say you did a wonderful job on this narrative poem. the way it's telling her what to do as you're in anticipation to read the next ...

Everything was a game all you said was a lie those three words never ment to escape your lips stupid me i should have known, it hadn't been the first ...

hello there just stopping by to look at your poem, i went through it quickly and then reread it again and liked what i saw especially the first verse of ...

hello there just stopping by to look at your poem.i gave it a quick look i then reread it and liked what i saw. im still a little confused about ...

incredible poem,the way you threw everything out,what happend, what was felt,how you realized something in the end just in a couple of paragraphs.i like how you didn't hold back and ...

i really like your poem,it's so simple and straight forward.singing helps with so many things. wether it's a sad time,happy time, emotional matter what the situation is singing is a ...

heys there, i enjoyed reading your short poem and how its expressing how youre feeling and what's happening in a small and fast detailed way. as i read the last ...