radiatelove23

this is a very sweet n touching poem. i liked the verses and how they rhymed although some lines where a little off but the imagery it gave was so ...

it's a very nice and true poem,i liked the meaning/message of it but for the first stanza you could use different words to describe love. something emotional or strong. other ...

what a nice poem,i really liked it:) the way you expressed everything that is in a heart,everything we convey in it. once i started reading i couldn't stop and once ...

*i mean first paragraph starting with second line

i've got to say this is a very unique and strong poem.the emotions, the words,how things seemed vivid from the start and it jusf fully had my attention. the first ...

you've got an amazing poem! the way it's written,how you can see and feel some emotion.the last stanza had a great ending and it seemed to speak out.only thing is ...

very nice poem you have going here.the choice of words are very creative, the main point is very clear.i liked it and adding colors to it all made it seem ...

wow! these covers are really great,such amazing detail and love how they go with the title.first one in particular.very nice and creative edit! good luck:)

this is such a good short story! im with the above person,there should have been a kiss,it would have make it something colorful;) maybe you could write another part to ...

can i just say how good this is!!you did an amazing job! some words needed capatalization but over all it was great! loved the writing and choice of words i'll ...

this was a very deep poem and i love how it's written,very straight forward and telling about how a person changed all because of someone else and leading to the ...

aw,what a cute and loving poem.i liked how you expressed how you feel in such short verses and whst you wish happens. the rhyming from line to line was good,it ...

let me start off with, i love your poem! how you look back at the past and wish you were there or wish to be the happy person you used ...

hi there,two things to say:let me start off by saying i liked how this was going to be a poem but decided to turnit into lyrics because as i read ...

hi there,i just went over your poem quickly and then reread it and let me say you've got a nice,strong and vivid poem going on.not much like these out there.the ...