radiatelove23

wow, i really liked your was good and really thought out:) except i do think it should be 'right' instead of 'alright' overall i did enjoy it. while reading through ...

okay i read your poem a couple of times and to me it sounded more of you telling a story.a narrative poem. but you did say you just felt like ...

okay, i read your poem a couple of times until i began feeling the emotion of it.now not very powerful but yet has a great understanding/meaning. it also gives visualization ...

okay i just read your poem and i can say i found it very interesting and feeling very real. i like the choice of words you chose and the lines ...

this was quite an interesting an unique poem but i quite liked it.the choice of words were really something different than what ive read which makes it even better.nice job

this poem was very sweet and i liked it.expressing how you felt in sucha short poem really showed the emotions.the last two lines however were out of place.maybe you could ...

your poem is extremely wonderful and i loved every single line:) how it explains how you feel and what you need but in the end it's not what you thought ...

Tina Vetter speaks the name, the name of my bestfriend gentle and caring heart warming and loving the one i can count on,the one i can trust please don't ever ...

I find myself sitting in the dark my door is locked the curtains are down i know what i've done as sharp shooting pain takes over my arm teardrops fall ...

this is the first chapter i read of your story,and ofcourse as obvious im going to be lost but the thing is even though i have not read the others ...

you have a nice short story going on here and from the start i was captured in.the only thing though is the name remy is mentioned alot and maybe you ...

let me start off by saying, what a wonderful poem and even before reading it, the title does say it all:) now this poem has a great meaning and it's ...

you have a great poem going on and all i can do is continue reading it..i had a little hard time following at first maybe due to the chosen words ...

aww what an amazing strong and beautiful poem! you had my attention since the beginning and i loved every word line after line, stanza after stanza.your poem speaks the truth ...

nice poem,i like it.what was written is true:) when you dont have something you want it but if you have it you dont and people dont realize it. i reread ...