rachiegirla

You need an idea for the overall plot, though this may be basically your premise for the novel with a little elaboration. You don't necessarily have to write anything down. ...

Once upon a time there was an ugly princess. In truth, she wasn’t really ugly; she had a slightly large nose and very freckly skin, but she had a lovely ...

I think you're a bit harsh on your writing. It's very good. If you want to make it more logical: well, the impression I got is that it is a ...

This is definitely a prologue, because it's a little separated from the rest of the material (which, you know, isn't written, but I'm guessing it's the rest of the story. ...

Hi My name is Rachel, or Rachiegirl (my username). I'm sixteen and I'm about to start my last year at school. I love reading and writing. You know how some ...

Wow. That was kind of frightening and very powerful. I think the ending was the best part though, because it was funny but still fit with the rest of the ...

Well, I quite liked this. Does she survive? Sorry, just wondering. it’s fingers snagging on her cloak 'it's' should be 'its', because 'it' is the only word in the English ...

This is really good. I thought the first few sentences (about sickness) were excellent, because they contained good description and were an intriguing beginning. The only thing to be aware ...

Wow. Dramatic. You shouldn't feel nervous since (so far) it's a good story. My only, very small, criticism, is that Fang "had" got himself into trouble rather than "has". But ...