quietloud798

I know! I still watch Saved by the Bell and whatnot Chowders creeps me out so bad Same thing with that Flapjack show I don't what those people who made ...

I really like the premise of the poem, and your rhyming works But to me, it's a but unconsistent When your doing your stanzas, keep sort of a pattern going, ...

Crashing on the shore The waves are my comfort But strength of the current Pulling me under Failing to think at all My mind is a clear as the sky ...

Wow and a million times wow That was great The same as the other commenters is what's with the numbers? Shakespeare used them and it goes with the language but ...

So... I'm very confused to be honest The last lines go together but the rest was kind of out there If you could tie it all in somehow and make ...

In the beginning I was confused when you talked about the owners, but when I read the last line it all came together It was brilliant how you made a ...

I'm not the best critic in the world so bear with me I like the how the poem flows in one story but I just have one question When you ...

You can find most of my work in Other Poetry I write more unconventinal stuff, and I kind of surprised when I saw all of the time period peices If ...

I love the story Adam seems like the biggest sweetie and Carter is like the total jock big brother The only thing is, like someone said before, it was a ...

Push Through the tough barriers The steel exteriors The far fetched hides Run Though closed doors yield Wear my heart and sheild Ram my feet down on the pavement Fight ...

Thanks you guys for the advice! It's very helpful! And wow that's super cool that we have the same name Racheal! So I absolutly love alternative type music and some ...

That's really amazing I love the part about love because it holds so true Your imagery is brilliant Keep writing!

My name's Rachel and I love to write Most of my inspiration comes from nature I love friends so just add me or whatever and I'll talk to you So ...