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Re: A Girl Called Beast
Hello Awakening! So this is a very interesting, don't get me wrong, but there are a few parts that are a bit bumpy. The skull of any animal Would be ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: How to Live
Hi Dradian! I really like this a lot! I absolutley love how you made it clear yet still have a lovely ring to it! My only problem with it is ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Top to Bottom, Left to Right
Hello Audy! Ok, so I think this is really cool! Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm pretty sure it makes sense being read column by column AND left to ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Writting~ all of you should know what i am talkign about
Hi Channon! I love how you wrote this piece! It's lovely, it's different, it has a very fresh expression as well. But I'm hoping, as Mia already stated, that you ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Whatshername *Edited*
Thanks you guys! I'm working on it at the moment and I am definitly greatful for your comments! And Silversun, you can just call me Rachel, thanks! By the way, ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey everyone! I'm back from what seems like a forever long vacation!
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Whatshername *Edited*
Hello all, I haven't been on in quite some time, but I'm hoping now that school seems to be settling down a bit, I'll have more time to focus on ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Celebrities Dead
An end of an era. So sad.
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: He's Mine
Thanks for the reviews, you guys! GreatEscape, he does like her, to clear that up, but I'm not sure how to fix it up to make it convey the message ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: He's Mine
Ok, so I've been going through a dry spell, and this is the some of the first stuff I've written in a while. I understand that it probably sucks. (It's ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: my curse
Hey so now that you explained what it's about it makes more sense, but I think the lines need to be cleaned up a bit. And when it's alright if ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Soulmate
So I'll just get right to it. An Autumn afternoon, I sat on the porch alone- When I suddenly saw you walk round the corner, In the last line, "suddenly" ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
Yeah. Uncle Buck. TPBM is allergic to peanuts
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Thanks and Gratitude
Well, I'm not much for small talk, so I'll get down to it. A seasons change That brings new winds Also brings new minds. At first I thought it was ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
I'm listening to "If We Ever" by High Contrast. It's just about my favorite song ever.
Jun 3, 2009
