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I'm not the biggest fan of talking about myself but I'm insanely bored so here goes. So here goes... My name's Rachel, I'm in eigth grade, and I'm fourteen. I ...

It's a lovely poem, but I do have a few problems with it. I like how you mix up 3 and 4 verse stanzas, but your rythmn is off. Also, ...

Crazy, Break the Ice, If You Seek Amy, Mmm Papi, and Phonography. I loved Britney Spears when I was little, and me and my friend Cece made up routines to ...

Wow. This was very very good. I love the message, and how real it all sounded. I'm not exactly sure what a swath is, but thats the only thing that ...

So this had me a bit confused In the beginning, the heavy repetition was kind of odd I like the idea, but the idea needs to be brought out harsh, ...

Beautiful poem if you ask me Around halfway thru tho, it became a bit confusing You have the three verse stanza, and it's all by itself, stating something you already ...

Name: Rachel Age: 14 Fav book: Fade Fav author: Lisa McMann Fav food: Nerds Fav store: Zumiez Fav hobby: Reading Fav sport: Volleyball Fav shoes: Converse Fav song: How did ...

You seem like a not so bad guy I'd watch yourself though I get eaten alive on this site But I think we'll get along just fine Good luck

Giving up Isn't an Option Anything done Now is Worth it In The Long Run, We are Better off. I'm not Scared Anymore. Backing down is bull No excuse Will ...

I agree. This was good, but I mean does it really need to be so long? You have a lot in you, I bet, and you're a great poet. It ...

This is a very soulful poem, and I love it. There isn't much to complain about. Actually, I haven't seen a poem like this in awhile. The feel is beautiful, ...

This was a pretty interesting poem. Not bad, my friend, not bad. I never thought I'd like a poem like this, since old style kind of writing doesn't make much ...

This is so so true. But at some parts it's kind of hard to read. The three verse stanzas are a bit odd like the others said. Also, I couldn't ...

I really really liked this poem. The body of the poem went well together and your rythmn was barely off. Though in the beginning, it seems too forced. "When you ...

This is SOO funny! Love it! The only thing that kind of doesn't make sense is how each line is said. Play around with it! Don't be afraid to go ...