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Cutee, I like Eric already, this sorta energetic bouncy blonde which is completely different to June, this moody reluctant and unwitting heroine. Pm me with your next chapter, please.

This is great, the portrayal of the characters looks so genuine and the mystery is absolutely intriguing. You may want to cut down on the said bookisms (e.g., "growled"), because ...

Now I wanna a character living in my head. Sable -my favourite- is gonna be rampaging through my head in no time. Love the thoughts, it's such a great idea. ...

This is so deep.... but I love the language, and also how you didn't personalize the narrator by giving him a name. I love how it wrenches your soul and ...

This is such a great poem! There are some really great metaphors in here. It's so symbolic and the words are just - indescribably fitting. It's like there's a poem ...

Maybe Christmas... That half-lidded smile was bugging him again. Really, really bugging him. The hooded crescent moon eyes and lips that gently tipped up exuded an air of pleasantness and ...