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Baitlyn: well, we played around (lacrosse, chica. lacrosse.) and talked, and eventually got tired, sat down on a bench, talked some more.. and maybe we kissed a little. maybe not. ...

Tayyluh: Bah Humbug. Baitlyn: ur sn should be TAYYSCROOGELUH. haha this was hilarious something we would say :) i liked tis part better :D so for bad critique, but it's ...

Tayyluh: Bah Humbug. Baitlyn: ur sn should be TAYYSCROOGELUH.

hey gurrl :) ok enough sweet talk. Of course I love the humor in your writing, but when your writing "IM" stories, just think of it as like a real ...

I like it! This subject is actually quite interesting though, I didn't quite understand this part: You must be the eldest, everyone seems young and naive, their ages ranging from ...

Man that was good :D To me, it's one of those love stories that just makes you want to keep flipping the page :) Awesome work! keep it up!

Hmm. Interesting. A few spelling errors hear and there, but a good plot. Maybe work on more details in the dialogue to make it sound more believable.

Haha. Well it was quite interesting that Luke put the deceased cats in a chest, and just left them there xD Anyways, Good writing. I personally like the way you ...