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Re: A Poem for You
hmmmmm.....lovely twist at the end! there is one thing though The soft features you possess eloquently differ From your deep, intense eyes…illuminated among The crowd of others. I do not ...
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Re: Your eyes
hey! nice one! but dont you feel that the tempo gets distorted in the end??
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: The Cycle
nice work! bravo! its a very very unique style that ive never seen before! just one doubt though your words He wrote poems and bought her whatever She messed around, ...
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Re: Perceptions
Perceptions (inspired by the quote “i complained that i had no shoes until i saw a boy with no feet”) Act I: The Heir The tantrums of the landlord’s heir, ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Your Heart, My Home...
Your Heart, My Home... Inscriptions on stone may fade, But bonds of the heart never do, It is your heart I’ll make my home, That is, if you allow me ...
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Re: The Ranger
The Ranger Over the hills and mountains beyond, Living next to a shimmering pond, Was a ranger with his sliver steed, And to every call, he would take heed. In ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: the fear
heyy there!! i really liked the concept of this one! but i was kinda dissapointed when u ended it abruptly! would have really liked it more if there was more ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: The Lily
The Lily The sight of the single white lily, Ends my evening stroll, The sight of it in my eyes, Makes every known, unknown… The immortal wind blows across, And ...
Aug 27, 2009 -
Re: Heyyya!!
Hey there!! This is Qasim here!! For starters, I feel quite honored to be amongst people who not only express their inner emotions in words but are also brave enough ...
Aug 27, 2009
