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Re: cyber (16+)
So, I know that this review is for a poem that is, in all likelihood, long out of your mind, and without need of my input. However, if I may ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Cat is Friend.
*gasp!!!!!!!!!!!* Now, this was a good read! I loved it! It really brought out the kid in me, and reminded me that while constructing your own world is fun, exciting, ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: The Swirl (Love is like ice cream... it melts eventually)
Love, to be perfectly honest, this was rather disappointing. Dialogue is supposed to supplement, highlight, and enhance your story. However, with this story, without the dialogue, THERE IS NOTHING. Th
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Princess-Sister
My, my, my, my, MY! That was a VERY delightful read! You're material was fantastic, and I'm so glad that I got the chance to read. I love the title ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Blood and Crosses
Wow. I have no idea how to start your review, but just... wow. You had me shivering the entire time. This was an exquisite read, and I'm really glad you ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Valentine
Hello! Alright, so, I felt that this was a very well constructed poem, and it definitely submerged me in the tone of the passages. As far as I saw, there ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
You made a small typo in the seventh line. But, this fact aside, I applaud you on the message you convey and the way you convey it. Take a stand ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: This Drama Never Ends
I'm not quite sure how to feel about this. I can see that you have the ability to write a good high-school romance, but this was not the best fulfillment ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: The Concept of Fears
I'm so confused. It was very very humorous, though i felt that word choice caused it to be limited.
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Sun God
= I looked as the two demigods knelt in front of me. "So you want to use my Chariot?" I asked my daughter and her friend . "Yes sir. This ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Echoes
I walk all alone, I'm trapped by these walls. An echo of silence Rings through the halls.
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Fever Dream
Oh my. . . . Well, I've made my first post less than twenty minutes ago, got the notification of your reply six minutes ago, so let's see. . . ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Hi?
I don't really have any idea how to do this, let alone begin, but here goes... Hello all! I'm Pyro. I'm brand new to this site; I got dragged into ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Paper or Plastic?
I just don't like e-readers, be they nook, iPad, DS, or desktop computer. For me personally, a large factor in the enjoyment that I draw from a story comes from ...
Jun 7, 2011
