pyro

Aww!! Screw it, sometimes you need something cliche! :D This was a heart-wrenching poem, and I'm tearing up right now. I like that you italicized the thinking parts. It helps ...

well. . . You apparently deleted it. . . Sad face. .. .I'm sure you have good reasons, though.

Haha, very nice, my friend. There was very little to this piece, but that's ok! It was short, sweet, simple, and fun. When I first read the title, I was ...

Overall, you have a very good story to this. However, it was not what I would call a 'spectacular' work. Your rhyme scheme was non-existent, but that's not really an ...

Wonderful story! You really have done a great job with it as far as I'm concerned. You wrote the narrative-portion of the email in first-person present-tense, which was surprising to ...

Well, this is definitely a good little read. You have a riveting story, and tell it in a way that cause my gut to clench. Yet, while this was an ...

Wicked! Bloody 'ell, this was a fun read! Fantastic job!

Overall, fun, and very enjoyable. There are a couple things, though. For one thing--- In the third sentence, I suggest you add a comma after 'this'. For another thing. You ...

UGH!!! I am SOOOO sorry that it's taken me this long to give you your review! I'm such a bad friend. . . anyway *cough cough* Hello again, my friend. ...

Hello, Hana! I'm Pyro, and it's a pleasure to see you on this site. I'm somewhat new to the site, but don't worry, it doesn't take long at all to ...

Wow, this is a nice little fan-fiction, and I like the general idea behind this. You have a decent plot and story-line. However, there are several things within your fan-fiction ...

Aww. . . This was a touching story, and I'm kind of sad that I read it. . . *sniffle* Well, bravo for the emotions that you stirred in me, ...

Hello! You sure are a new face around here. Don't worry, you'll learn quickly enough that ((for the most part)) we don't bite. . . Or, at least, we try ...

Seriously? Are you freaking serious????? You have AGOT to be kidding me. This was bland. The rhyming was, to sugar-coat it a thousand times over, at best mediocre. Your characters ...

I really hate to say it, darling, but this was a bit of a let-down. When I write something gory, I go all out. If I write a paper on ...