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Re: Ghost
Sounds like someone I know. . .
Jan 28, 2007 -
Re: Emergence (Updated 6/29/07)
Yeah, I saw a couple mistakes, but I was too caught up in the story to remember any of them.
Jan 28, 2007 -
Re: Two Worlds, Two Wars
I had the feeling that you kept switching between describing the present and describing the past. I liked it though, it was very captivating.
Jan 28, 2007
