purplepen

Hello SakuraFallsSweetly! I am purplepen and I shall be your first reviewer! Reviewing poetry isn't really my thing, but I'll try my best. By the way, don't worry about the ...

I don't think this sucks at all! At first, it was a little confusing, but it gradually got easier to understand. By the way, all of my corrections and comments ...

Authors Note: Hey, I'm back!! Man, It's been a while since I've posted anything! I had to write this poem about Helen of Troy for a school project, but I ...

Hi! I really liked this piece. It was short, simple, and had a great message. I only spotted one error: Susan of thought the day ahead and grimaced. I think ...

You did a very good job at potraying the dark side of main character's emotions. I could pick up on her rage and jealousy very easily. The whole peice felt ...

Hi! This was very good! I can totally relate to this because my aunt Mary acted like that before she died. One second she would be giving me a hug, ...

Hi! Hm, I really liked this. It was very detailed and well writen. Nick’s mother brought out multiple dishes piled with food. ''They don't own me and neither do you. ...

Never Back Down Even though the odds are against us, we will not back down. Against the strogest armies, Against the fiercest winds, Before the mightiest oceans, We will prove ...

WARNING! This story contains violence, rape, character death, and abortion. Also, this story is against abortion, so if you are for abortion, you may find it to be a little ...

Not So Quiet After All You may think I'm shy in class, Quietly waiting for the time to pass, But with my friends you would not see A shy and ...

Aw! Their first kiss! Karen was absoutely hilarious! I loved this. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Only two more to go. Keep it up!

FINALLY! The hat! Your stories are getting better and better with each one you post! This is by far your best GrayXClaire yet! It was so cute! I loved it! ...

First of all, I have read alot of lyrics on this site, but this is by far the best I have read (On this site). I absolutely loved it! I ...

Hi there! This was a very good piece. You have a good style of writting, and it was very fun reading this. I loved the discription, exspecially in the first ...

YES! I'm the first! :) I liked that you're adding in some drama. It should get really interesting now! As far as I can tell, you don't have any grammatical ...