purplegirl14

Wow. Very funny! I love the meow mix part! The rhymes are very creative and interesting. Not sure if this was intentional or not, but the capitolization at the begining ...

Thanks a lot! That really helped! I went back to try and fix the first paragraph. The show not tell part is always hard for me, but I'm working on ...

Your story is really good. It's very original and inventive. You have very creative names. The details are in depth, but not to much. The only thing I noticed that ...

I just joined, and I'm having a good time. I also just made my first post! If anyone could explain the points to me that would be great! :)

I like how the first one is kind of mysterious, but still looks real. The second one is awesome! The way the house and trees are reflective gives off a ...

There was no noise coming from the building in front of me, but I took the safety off my gun anyway. I pushed the door open cautiously. It squeaked horribly, ...