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this is an easy question to answer. I am heterosexual. As hard as I try, there is no way for me to look at another man, and say, "yeah, I'm ...

In short, people are going to start wars over ideology. That will always happen. religion doesn't cause wars, religion is an excuse for wars. if there was no religion, that ...

I belive in Psi powers, but not the way most people do. I don't belive fortune telling works, or any of that nonsense, but I myself are what some would ...

Okay, before I start this review, let's get my duty as a nerd out of the way. there is no stargate galactica. stargate= a thing, battlestar galactica= a thing, but ...

Hi stargazer, welcome to YWS. Let me tell you from personal experience that you have nothing to worry about. The people here are really nice, and almost every review I've ...

Hi Neha! welcome to YWS! This site is a writer's paradise, and since there are so many things to do, I'm not surprised you're a little confused as for where ...

I must say I enjoyed reading this. the charecters were three dimentional, the action was exciting, the romance was touching, and the sudden change of narrator was pretty cool. frankly ...

this was very good, and it left me excited for the next chapter. there are a few things I would like you to make a little more clear though. first, ...

this was very good, and I'm interested to see where you go with this. I noticed you put up a first chapter, so I'll be reviewing that as well. I ...

this was a great story, with only a few minor flaws. the only two things about it I would change would be the typos, and the clarity. I think you ...

you might want to read this: so that you have some inkling of an idea what is going on... Chapter two The next morning was painful. Waking up and remembering ...

I was nineteen when I watched my village burn to the ground. It was a tranquil autumn morning, and the dew had not yet descended from the brightly colored leaves ...

so judging by the poll, it seems somewhere around 75 percent of people here on YWS write fantasy... I was wondering, since there are so many of you, if one ...

this is cliche, but definately show don't tell.

if you're charecter swears, then he swears, but it is vital that you make sure it doesn't sound forced. if it sounds like you purposefully put those words there just ...