psudiname

I think you've done quite well on this, and I really enjoyed reading it. After giving many reviews, it seems to me that the hardest problem writers have on YWS ...

The wind struck bitterly at frigid face as I franticly scrounged for dry lumber. A small spot of blood, covered a bit my hand before the washed it away. Yet ...

Because I can create an entire world, and have it be anything I want.

let me start by saying that I'm really glad you continued this, because I really enjoyed the previous three, and it took a while for this to come out so ...

Chapter eight The door opened reluctantly with a loud creaking sound, as if hundreds of tiny pieces of wood were splintering simultaneously. As I stepped into the room beyond, the ...

I liked this piece because it was witty and clever. personification is a good source of humor, and I especially liked the part about Inspiration being out to buy cheese. ...

Chapter seven As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent. Wave after wave of blue tribals flung themselves without fear at us. ...

once again, the story was fun to read, and it's clear you have a talent for writing. If I had to suggest a way to make this chapter better, I ...

So, I must say, I enjoyed reading this, and I think you have done a good job with this piece. without writing a whole lot, you have managed to get ...

Chapter six After we set up our campsite, which had grown considerably since the previous night, (The twins actually had mats to sleep on and cooking utensils, which we used ...

can you review my novel? I don't know what your policy on novels is, but as of right now only the first two chapters have reviews and the third fourth ...

Chapter five What happened next was fairly anticlimactic. Two boys, identical down to the very cloths and weapons they carried, stepped from the foliage calmly. Sarah and I were still ...

I must say I really liked this chapter, and I'm glad to see you continued writing this story. I don't have much critisism, except maybe for the end, where you ...

Hi Twist, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here, and I hope you find it as nice as it looks. If you're into writing, this is the place ...

Hi JustMe, It's Psudiname again. Overall the chapter was good, but it could have been a little better. The main flaw with it was just how confusing it was. Switching ...