psudiname

hi I'm Psudiname and I will be reviewing your work today. all in all I thought it was pretty good and I think you should definately continue. my favorite things ...

hi ryan, welcome to yws. its awesome here. really, its true; you will never find a crazier bunch of awesome writers in one place. well technicly one website... anyway, I'm ...

When he finished eating dinner, a simple but tasty meal of bread and meat, Kyle fell into bed around the time it got dark, and fell right to sleep. Possibly ...

wow. the first thing I have to say is that this is the most eloquent bio I have ever seen on this forum. If you achieve half of the passion ...

hi kimberleigh, welcome to YWS. I'm Psudiname, and if you ever need anything critiqued or just read, PM me, and I will be glad to help. also, as a fellow ...

hi gypsy, welcome to YWS, the only writing community I know of with active members. I hope you like it here as much as I do. anyway, if you ever ...

a guy who loves writing eh? well I just happen to be a guy who loves reading. if you ever need something reviewed, just PM me, and yes, you'll get ...

wow, great story. if I had to describe it with four words, they would be chilling, gripping, fluid, and macabre. I liked how all of your dialogue seemed to flow ...

hi pro, welcome to our community of writers. I hope you like it here, and feel free to either review some of my work or ask me to review yours, ...

are you possibly referring to richard strauss who wrote the horn concertos?

When he awoke in the morning, Kyle was delighted to confirm that he was indeed living in some form of reality, (for before that, he could not be certain, even ...

wow, great story. it had a nice flow to it, and the dialogue felt relaxed and real. i felt you did a good job on developing your charecters, and really ...

this is pretty good, and very descriptive, with great vocabulary that is just above average but not too difficult to decipher. maybe you were a little too descriptive, but hey, ...

i have four or five more chapters that i expect to post when i get more points. until then why not read my halloween contest entry? btw, you might consider ...

hello, I am Psudiname and I will be reviewing your work today. you will be pleased to know that I have no negative comments, and would simply like to complement ...