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here is the first chapter of the novel I'm working on. don't hold back.

this is a the first chapter of a novel I'm still working on. don't hold back.

music broke my last writer's block. call me cliche, but the emotion in many of adele's songs really inspired me to creativity. with all the anger, sadness, greif and hope, ...

there are three qualities that make any monster way scarier to me personally. first, if it's smart. if it can think three steps ahead and find some clever way to ...

could you review the first two parts of my short story? it will probably have about ten parts because all I know how to write are novels, and you said ...

could you review this? it's sort of a hiest type short story

could you review the first part of my short story?

could you review part one of my new short story?

Chapter Four Matt The next day began the usual interim period between jobs. With no real work to do, we had nothing better to do than keep up the illusion ...

I don't usually do reviews like this, because they are long and tedious, but I really liked this chapter, and had a lot of specific things to say, so here ...

I must confess that this is very well written and fluid. with just dialogue you manage to convay a lot of emotion, and that is a rare talent. given how ...

Chapter Three Lisa As soon as the man left, Matt flipped the sign on the door so that it read 'closed', and turned around with a massive grin. We all ...

I liked this a lot. The way that sentences are worded gives the peice a very charming effect, and the premise is delightfully fresh. While there is nothing new under ...

wow. this was quite well done. by acknowledging the societal norm of men being soldiers as a bias that most people have, you managed to deliver an eye opening message ...

Chapter Two Lisa The keycard slid easily through its respective lock, making a satisfying click as the light turned green. My heart began to beat faster and faster now that ...