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Re: What does this username make you think of?
a beautiful young girl
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
you know you're a writer when you meet a new person, and the first thing you think about is that you should use their name for your next main charecter ...
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Re: I want advice to start writing well before it's too late!
if you want to write a good story you should start by identifying what your plot is. most plots follow a three act structure, where the first act shows your ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: VERY rough draft, untitled first chapter
I have now written an actual chapter version of this, so if you're planning on reviewing this, review this instead I was nineteen when I watched my village burn to ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: I'm new! yeeeeeeee
Can I call you Bubbles? Welcome to YWS bubbles, hope you enjoy being a member, this place is a writer's paradise. There are lots of cool forums, features, and things ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
well it's been a while, but now I'm on spring break and I don't have school to worry about. I, Psudiname am back, and I plan on getting as far ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter eight
Chapter eight: the hunted "So what you're saying is, you're a Russian boy who was deployed to America because you're a secret government super soldier, and now you're separated from ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: The space/time bar and grill
Caleb now knew what side he had chosen. that girl was a slave trader, and there was only one culture he knew that condoned slavery. americans. having no gun, Caleb ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Chapter One
hey Socks, it's me again. I must say, the prologue piqued my attention, but this chapter has me hooked. I thought this was very good, and very little improvement is ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story chapter seven
Chapter seven: the hunt From the moment one of the soldiers shouted that their prisoner had escaped, all of the other men sprang into action. Collecting their rifles, the company ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]
first, thanks for giving me plot ideas, I was kind of stuck there and you helped a little so, thanks. second, I know you don't like war novels, but you ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Gem of the Magi - Chapter Two
I'm liking this, and I'm interessed to see where it goes, because in all honesty it has a very interesting plot. so far we havn't seen the conflict, so it ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story chapter six
Chapter six: behind enemy lines Caleb felt a multitude of arms lifting him. Barely conscious, he guessed that they belonged to McClellan and his company, who were undoubtedly taking him ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm DaSpetsnaz!
hey DaSpetsnaz, welcome to YWS. I think you'll find that it's as fun as it looks. it seems that every time I think YWS has nothing more to offer, I ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Music while you write?
I'm listening to sinatra right now! I love music while I work, especially if it matches the story. in fact, most of the time, I get inspired by song lyrics ...
Jan 1, 2011
