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Chapter Two “We don’t know till I complete the Change.” I said, grabbing a pillow from bed. “I know you will.” Brian said. “How do you know?” I questioned scanning ...

Okay, right of the bat I love this! You're a really good writer and I am off to read chapter one RIGHT NOW! Haha, I really like this!

Okay, this is reallly good! I really liked it and it pulled me in. What i think is that you should change this up a bit and make expand on ...

Hey I really like this! It's sounds really good so far! Well, I don't really like to review but, I will anyway. The only thing that I don't like is ...

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! You're such a good writer! Great imagination! Well, in some of your sentences the begginng of your words the letters are capitalized. You might want ...

Beauty flowed from every inch of her body. She could feel every man in there looking her over. Vultures, every single one of them! She gingerly reached down to feel ...

I really like this!!!! ITs' really good! Please post chapter two!!!!!!! If you don't I'll be depressed =[! There area a few mistakes but, I'm too lazy to point them ...

Wowzers! This is really good! I love it! You're a really good writer! I can't wait to read to next chapter, which will be in like a minute! Well, if ...

This is really good! I like it and i want to read more! Please post another chapter! You're a really good writer. There are a few mistakes in here but, ...

Uh, not to be mean, but Ian sounds a lot like Edward from Twilight. I suggest you mix it up a little, I mean you don't have to change everything ...

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This is really good! Uh, just to let you know some of your dialog looks like this “who’s music are we going listen to on the way?” You have to ...

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Hey I really like this story so far =D The story is really good and your a really good writer! I hope you write more! I want to know what ...