primrose22

Thank you so much for your detailed review! I checked, and wow my capitalization was super wonky. I didn't even notice it when writing. As whether or not it's meant ...

Thank you so much for your comment. "Ous" was really just supposed to be "vigourous" from the line before. I seperated the syllables that way to get some kind of ...

Thank you for the comment. :) I'll definitely consider your suggestion.