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Re: Sweat and Ice - Chap. 1
hi, KJ i quite love this work of yours. i am praisejoe, a nigerian. your work was very intresting i must remark and also captivating. i don't also have to ...
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Re: God's Princess
i will like to say i love yopur poem so much, the simplicity of the poem and it's impressive arrangements are so remarkable. also the use of various words and ...
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Re: Peepholes from heaven
helo your poem is quite intresting good figurative language nice stunts. but ther are some loop holes you have to correct thanks cheers
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Another Chance short story
dear aurora i quite love this work of yours keep it up good characters amazing stunts and generally a nice story thanks. you can email me cheers
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Mei (working title) - Prologue
thanks for the story it's nice but has some mistakes in then genarally, its a nice work i'm praise cheers "the truth can set you free but you must first ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: The Last Word
your poem is a great one. it was so fascinatig and intresting reading the poem thanks to your knowledge and good application of literary techniques. they made your poem an ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Bones
my dear, cat-sama this your story is simply intresting. the more i read it the more hungry i become for more. it is so breath taking and exciting, hope you ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Strawberry Kisses #4
my dear, i never thought this was going to happen. your work is so so intresting. i also hope you write part five of this story. i am very intrested ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: lyric poetry
here lies the once dainty hero parched and earth-beaten from life's injustice here he lies ghoulish and motionless he has gone down like the receding of mighty waters he who ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Coven Born Chapter One (part one) REWRITE
hi, my dear your story is lively and i like the way you write them. there are some wrong usage of the english in your story. mistakes that ought not ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 1
hello dear, inspire i quiet admire your skills in writing. the way you make use of words and phrases to imply right meaning. your story watching windows is a bomb ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
nice cute story. i think there are few punctuation problems. do erase them
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
really cute story
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: fiction story
bida walked past her father's hut - which was the largest- and came to her mother's situated at the end of the compound close to the fireplace. her father, chief ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: the weeping mother
as the sea waves sofly caress the mud-rimmed shores the ever-caring mother beholds her child an angel. in the midst of turbulence she lays still praying her loved one home ...
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