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Re: Moonlight Romance
hello i found your work and just wanted to say hi, you're welcome to YWS it is a wonderful world online where you can create, write and blog. your story ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: lyric poetry
thank you
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Re: Adonis
hello monarch, i will like to say that that was a good one coming from you as a new member. your poem was quite intresting, and impressive. i love your ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Smoking Camels on Your Grave
ummmmh well simply amazing touching wonderful it's just so so intresting i hope she sees it even on a latter date thanks cheers
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Re: Happily Ever After
hi, i am praise. ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm your wo
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Re: the caring mother
As the sea waves softly caress the mud- rimmed shores the ever-caring mother beholds her child an angel in the midst of turbulence she lays still praying her loved one ...
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Re: the princess
Chapter One Bida walked past her father's hut- which was the largest in the compound- and came to her mother's situated at the end of the compound, close to the ...
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Re: An Ode To Insanity
i will like to say it is quite a nice poem. ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Re: All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]
hi, i am praise. i love you work and the intresting way you presented it. although there are many grammatical errors in them i will like to say it was ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: A memory
hi, this is a very intresting and fantastic piece of literary writing and i can't help but say it is wonderful. i am particularly intrested in the way you wrote ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Lonely Hearts-A Preface
mistakes: farther not father. i"m praise and i sincerely love the way you wrote your poem. it was intresting and captivating i also love the way the poem ended. quite ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: School For Magical Creatures
name: praisejoe age: 14 race: negro grade: juniour appearannce: 5"7", shy,low hair cut, red lips and small nose. personalities: shy but daring abilities: singing, dancing disabilities: none pet: cat
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Re: The Elephant Boy {two}
i like your story. i will like you to keep me informed on when the next part is to be released, fascinating and well-written. "the truth can set you free ...
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Re: Broken - 3
i have been following up your story broken. it has been intresting all the way. i am glad the story is now gaining more and more momentum probably from your ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: How We're Spending Friday Night...
hi, listeningforthemuse, ummmmmmm i quite think that was a good one. as you said i won't judge too harshy. you wrote the poem by 2:oo that was quite fine. i ...
Sep 4, 2008
