praisejoe

Hi, bailey good work here on your poem i want you back. It was very emotional and sad. You know at times when we make some decisions we end up ...

Hi, bailey good work here on your poem i want you back. It was very emotional and sad. You know at times when we make some decisions we end up ...

Hi, knightangel, welcome to YWS it is a very great site where you can write read and review. It's important you review the posts of other's so as to earn ...

Yoha-ahoy, here's praise and i will like to review this poem shreds. First of all it's a good one although with many flaws present in it. Ummmh...... Your poem is ...

hi, gamechanger im praise and i like your poem. the special flow and delivery it had to it. Please don’t run. You won’t be late. Love’s too strong, To kill ...

hi spike here's praisejoe. i just read your poem and i think its an intresting poem i love the nice flow and the rhyming used. Thunder roared, Eagles soared. Heaven ...

Hello, Here's two poems i wrote and i'm very much in need of your critique because it really helps a lot when writing. Any critique is welcomed. 1. When I ...

i love your poem and the right balance with nature. your use of scientific terms also got the poem going. 'electromagnetism' 'electrons' 'The beams of light' thanks

Sorry for not being too consistent on this forum. This is a little poem i wrote and will like you to have a look. I sincerely need your critique. The ...

I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that you expected out of me. i know i disappoint in everything i do, and even though you hate me, i'll always ...

hi, you poem is simply emotional and very touching and brings toind the sweet sorrow in parting ways. your poem is nice. keep it up

well your story in one lost the good usage of characters and you were in a hurry. Quietly Rosaline put her pen down on the dressing table and folded up ...

hi, i'm praise and i love the re-edited version of your work. Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:46 am Post subject: Raze the Roof ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

i think it is a short and intresting poem It's time for me to crash, boom, fall. Into your open arms, that don't seem So open anymore. It's time for ...

i think i love this poem and it's nice use of good phrases. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Katrina you have done your duty, satan has erected your cal