praisejoe

Thank You very much. That was helpful. I'll make the changes. Thanks

HI. I love your poem. It's simple and straight-to-point with it's message. Keep up and all the best.

It will soon be tomorrow and all these pains will be gone. I'll hold on one more night, for Father will be here when I wake. He'll hold me tenderly. ...

Today is just like every other day because every day is a struggle and no one seemed to care. Life on the streets holds no hope for a young child ...

Just want to thank every one who has commented on this poem. I really found your comments helpful!

I never knew this road was so long, until I walked it. I never knew these shoes were so big, until I stepped into them. I thought it would be ...

I must say, this a lovely emotional poem. GREAT WORK! The last reviewer has pointed out some little errors and I think correcting them will make this poem just great. ...

I love your poem. But like you said the problem is with the format. Basically, there are too many comas in the lines of your poem. But like I said, ...

HI. That's a great poem I must say! Apart from the already-highlighted grammatical errors :) , which I think you should correct, It's a great poem. Thanks

Hi, I love your poem. [quote="XxxcagedheartxxX"] Yet you seem content, with my shattered heart, so I shall count the days, for your love to change. The sudden change of 'tune' ...

You wandered far from where your corn was roasting in the fire. When the blind man told you ‘Let’s throw stones’ you forgot he had stepped on one, And he ...

Hi twilight girl. I just read your poem and i found it very interesting as it deals with an issue such as Friendship. You basically handled the poem very well ...

Hi twilight girl. I just read your poem and i found it very interesting as it deals with an issue such as Friendship. You basically handled the poem very well ...

Hi, i got to read your love poem and i quite found it interesting. Unlike other love poems it really has got style and i love it. If you drop ...

Hi dogs, if that is your name. LOL. Well i really got the message behind your poem communicated in a simple and appealing style. It was wonderful reading your poem. ...