powerofwords2008

it's a really good poem and i like the way that the focus is mainly for children, but the thing is that sometimes the rhyme appears to be forced. it ...

i like the way you use the cellophane wall to portray the detachment. i also like your description of things and ideas. however, something that you could have done is ...

i don't agree with the overall message of the piece, but the way in which it says is strong and also the punctuation and stanza seem to further accentuate the ...

if movies are any indication, then i believe that vampires can get pregnant. take blade for example. he was the result of the mating between a vampire and a human ...

America is not really something that can be summed up in one word. sure there is the arrogance and the rudeness and ignorance. there is alot of bad stuff about ...

i like this piece and the way you cover not only black as a color, but also its archetypal role. however, i feel as though there might be something missing ...

Evil's faithful cloak, Emptiness which no man should bear, Yet beauty and class beyond Orion, Shall death not swallow death?

this is a really good piece that manages to keep my attention and not only that but it balances the elements of darkness and love. it reminds me of a ...

Days are bright, but their truth has left me blind. They let you down, they last too long, oh, night to me is much more kind. A night, sings a ...

i loved the way you were able to balance all of the details and still make it interesting. what you're doing with the story is awesome and also you manage ...

okay. i like the setting and what you are trying to do with it. however, i feel as though too much focus is being placed upon the great book and ...

7/10. can we post anything except picking on the french? i think that's sort of been a bit overdone.

this is an interesting piece. you have a good usage of dialogue and accents and also the transitions and description are good as well. the numbers on the other hand ...

there are some areas in which there is great description, but overall i would have like to have seen some more exposition. there were a few grammatical errors, but i ...