powerofwords2008

It blinked its fierce eyes as it shifted its gaze from one scene to the next. The time had almost come for the act to take place. The countdown began, ...

okay. would it be possible to add something to the site where we can see how many points we have and also to be able to do something cool with ...

okay. i see what you're saying and i agree that that's a good method, but one of the problems i come up with in trying to do an outline like ...

Can you feel the currents blowing On top of the world? Motionless waves rolling, And a wrath unfurled. nice quote. i like the overall meaning of the piece and i ...

hey. i see all these sections about novels, poetry, band geeks, and all of that, but what about the different worlds aspect of the whole novel genre. does anybody have ...

who says mormons have horns? anyways. nice to meet you and wow you play both the piccolo and the flute? yeah. thanks for the review of my piece earlier i ...

if it hadn't been for the preface and the announcement that it was about your grandma that you gave at the beginning of the piece i would have been thinking ...

interesting piece to say the least although i am not exactly sure what it is about. i would maybe elaborate it a bit more toward the middle section and well. ...

The city glares around you, As drifters purr and allure, “Hey baby let’s get out of here.” They’re all over, breathing. Standing so near. Such swagger, . good lines. i ...

Taking no time in nailing your coffin, Spending time as small children laughing. Okay. The first line of these two, while a great visual, I don't get. I mean, I ...

i don't think the title of this collection really does justice to the pieces within it. the pieces themselves are very well written, and just about the only thing i ...

this is really good for your first attempt at poetry. i couldn't really tell that had it not been for the preface. the piece itself is well put together. i ...

~This is the first poem I ever wrote.. So... I hope it's okay!:)~ This may be so, my fair lady; His hand entwined around hers makes her blush, however, my ...

i like the way you brought in the title toward the end and your overall description, but something that you could do is be a bit more detailed in places. ...

He’s a beautiful dreamer Afraid to love, And of what people might think About what he’s dreaming of. He might change them all If he took a chance But he’s ...