poweroflove

You have a definite talent of describing everything around you to a definite T. You take in so much and you are just so majestic at how you write it ...

This is a beginning to a very interesting story. =] I would keep going with it, but watch how you phrase certain action phrases. Like "screaming my head off", that's ...

Amazing powerful poetry. This is a very good piece of work. =] I do feel there is a dark side behind every corner, so it's always good to become aware ...

Amazing piece of poetry. This is so powerful and touching, since it's so easy to relate to it on a wide margin. I feel that you portray someone who has ...

This is a really good piece of poetry. I'd say you have a natural talent. =] It's really cool to see someone writing a sort of Halloween poetry after it's ...

This is powerful... So powerful. Wow. I knew someone who suffered with epilepsy and I wish there was a cure. I wish no one had to suffer this disease. I'm ...

Wow... Amazing. This is the most interesting story I have ever read. Am I feeling a little bit of iRobot in there? ;) I saw a couple errors, but nothing ...

This is a really good piece of writing and it's a decent piece of free verse. =] No, it's not too wordy. I don't think a poem can be too ...

This is an opening to an amazing series. I can't wait for the rest. I totally feel a story burning to escape from the pages. I can't really think of ...

I'm not sure what you wrote this after, but it is really good. I can kind of relate to it, which is always a plus. I'd love to read the ...

This is good. It's different, which is always a good thing. =] I can't wait to read the rest.

This is very well written. I did see some mistakes here and there, but nothing too bad. I like how you address the fears. I lost my dad at a ...

Wow... Ah-mazing. So creative and different. I liked it... a lot. =] Keep going with it, but I have some questions. Is there going to be a relationship? What caused ...

Good story. :) It was quite realistic, which I like in stories but fiction is a good way to go too. :) Honestly, it's good, but are you planning on ...

First of all, amazing perspective on this book. I read your take on it and it changed my way of thinking. I think you have an amazing future if you ...