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MysteryMe

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My novel

by MysteryMe

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The first chapter of a novel that I started to write this summer. I won't post the rest of it, I just want some feedback on my writing style and some constructive criticism.
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  • 1 Work
  • 2,087 Words
  • 11 min Reading time
  • 7 Reviews
  • Aug 27, 2013 Started
  • Aug 27, 2013 Last updated

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  1. 1 Mother Aug 27 11 min read9 comments
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