poppiesinoctober

Blood on my hands. And his lips were like morphine. They attacked me hungrily. I couldn't get enough. I wanted more and more from him. "Am I beautiful yet?" "Soon," ...

That's so cute :) Honestly, I don't think the first word that pops in my head describing a toilet plunger would be cute, but in this case it definitely does. ...

I loved this. It was written so well. The images it creates were amazing. It's short, but powerful. And your grammar is awesome! :) You're so good with detail. I ...

It was so short! I liked it a lot, but I wish you had gone into more detail of why the character was blushing/burning. It would have been interesting to ...

This is the second story I have read of yours, and I must say, I love your writing. There was quite a few grammar/spelling errors, but they could be easily ...

This was...crazy. It was written very well, and the description was amazing. It made me shiver. I could get a clear picture in my head of what was happening, and ...

You did really well. I didn't spot too many mistakes. The title says it all-it's got a lot of fluff. I love the description. I could really picture it in ...

Cute. It flowed really well too. I liked it! :)

I really like what you're talking about. I think most people can relate to what you are talking about. We always have someone that we have feelings for, but they ...

Hello! (: I'm Rachel. I haven't posted anything yet, but I'm really excited to get started on that. This seems like a pretty fun website, so I look forward to ...