popatemyheart1994

Hi my names matt and pop ate my heart. I'll be reviewing this for you today! Just to say this poem really caught my ye, so I hope you like ...

“I finally know why I’m leaving.” I love this line. Jumps straight into the poem. Then with scissors she tinged the thread. We laid the quilt in the coffin, bowing ...

Thankyou everyone again for all the great reviews. Some great advice there. I'm glad you liked the poem, I wrote it for you! :)

I want you to understand I want you to touch my hand with your hand. Because baby, I promise I'll be the best you ever had. And I know that ...

Cliche much? Yes I'm aware. She let him be an escape from all her pain and grief his solicitous words and soft whisperings lulling her gently to sleep He was ...

But, soon my hand quickens. I am unstoppable, my anger escaping through the ink. I love this poem beacuse it was so specific and straight to the point. You didn't ...

I love this! I love the lyrics and the way you have structured them perfectly in the song. A great song to read! Well done!

There is absolutly no constructive advice I can give you for this as you obviously write amazing poetry! It is so sad and heartfelt and I could tell you meant ...

This one just didn't cut it for me. It felt rushed and as if there was not that much effort into it. I love the idea though and I think ...

I am sorry if this is true. You sound like a lovely person and for this to happen to you must be terrible. I found it very shocking reading this ...

I looked at the title and groaned a bit. It sounded a bit cheesy to me, but then when I read the lyrics I was literally blown away by your ...

I liked the idea of the poem, as I thought I can relate to it but your in danger of hiding the meaning of the poem under too much symbolism. ...

I thought this was very good for your second post! I like the idea of the poem and the structure is great. It is very simple but smart and good ...

Thankyou for my reviews, they werereally helpful, I'll be sure to review some of your poems aswell. Thanks for liking my poem it means allot to me, I wrote it ...

Im new and a bit nervous. If anyone has the time I have posted a small poem in Other Poetry. It would be amazing if someone could review it for ...