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Re: Holy Communion
DO NOT READ SPOILER TILL YOU HAVE READ THE POEM AND FORMULATED YOUR OWN INTERPRETATION. BELOW IS ONLY A DESCRIPTION ON WHY I WROTE THIS POEM AND MY INFLUENCES. THANKYOU ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I
1. I REFUSE TO REVIEW THIS BECAUSE IT IS AS IF YOU HAVE WROTE THIS WHOLE THING AND NOT EVEN PRROF READ IT AT ALL!!!! .SORT OUT YOUR GRAMMAR .SORT ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Poured Out
You might think me daft,
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Supernova
Okay, so I ws feeling all self obsessed and reflective so I wrote this, it's kind of about being in sync with someone, the events in the poem are happening ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Ooh I liked this. I love the concept to this and also by using this cncept your alo attracting people to read your work which is very clever. Not the ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Time.
I loved this, I liked how melancholy it was. It kind of scared me aswell, life goesby so fast and there is so much to experience. I think you captured ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: iced tea
I thought this was really bitter-sweet. The imagry was beautiful and I really loved the narrative flow. Good job. XXX
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)
I mean this in the least harshest way possible but I found this to look more like some manifesto instead of a poem, to me it did not reflect the ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: I Tread On Dangerous Ground
I Tread On Dangerous Ground I tread on dangerous ground. Bombs explode around me. They do not make a sound. I speak the truth. I speak my pain. I would ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Face Down In The Dark
Not really much to say on this other than that I really liked the use of metaphor in this. The flower metaphor is just beautiful. The subject matter was very ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Needs Title!
I can certainly empathise with this. Sometimes your writing is all you can depend on and when that is gone, what's left? I loved this poem,so much I think it ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Black Light
Oh love I think I may have lost my mind. Lying here asleep in the wake of my carnage, You should not have been so unkind. I'm taking you out ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Fall to rise Again
I liked this. The title caught my eye and I loved how you incorporated the image of some higher power affecting the narrator's life. Seems like you put alot of ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Instead Of You
I am gone. The battle’s won There will be no joke or pun. I have packed my love up in a box I’m moving on. You won’t cry for me ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Bodies
Your all amazing. thankyou!!! :)
Mar 12, 2011